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Andrey MKeymasterPlease submit your work on the past assignments here. We review them every month, last Thursday of the month.
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Vincent FEUTRIERParticipantHi Alex
This is my 2nd attend with the Christmas balls assignment.
I tried to apply all comments you have made last time.* Nikon D300 f13 ISO 100
* Lense Nikon 105mm Macro
* 3 lights
* 1 Savage Translum difusor to create a big rectangular Soft Box
* 1 Strip Box (edge light)
* 1 white V flat
* Blue Gel for backgroundThanks
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Vincent FEUTRIERParticipantwith the correct file size
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Match Point Studio Snc IT04958420269ParticipantHi Alex,
this is my second Pro Club assignment, and I really love to play with mirrors.
I find this metal and glossy lipstick for Valentine’s day, and i think they were perfect for this assignment.
I work a lot in postproduction to clean and have nice and sharp line, trying to leave the gradient.I’m not sure if the lipstick front is ok, because i can’t have a nice text without overexposing the metal. I’ve tried also to have a bigger gradient from the two stripbox, but I lose the sharp edges.
Thank you in advance for your review
Matteo Braghetta
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Andrew Oakley
ParticipantHi Alex,
This is my first Pro Club submission and is for the Dynamic Glass Shot with Splashes.
This was very exciting because as a new studio, this was my first ever commission for a splash shot, so this was a real shoot for a client last week! The product is a new soft drink which can be drunk by itself or as a mixer with alcohol. The client brief was simply “a splash shot with flying lemon, lime and ice on a white background with a tall glass with the bottle” – they’d seen an image on my website that I did for the Photogy product photography course portfolio and liked the idea.
The day after shooting, I had a disaster – a burst water pipe flooded my studio and this is why there are no BTS shots – I’d left things set up intending to take BTS photos…then I woke up to find a lake where my studio used to be! So instead, I’ve attached a sketch of the set up and will describe below. Hope it’s clear enough:
Backdrop was Translum with a rear Elinchrom D-Lite RX4. Above the shooting table, was a second RX4 with a 4′ Strip box.
To the left of the table was a large diffuser with a 3rd RX4 and 4′ Strip box, angled to produce a gradient on the glass. I had a white card for shadow fill on the front right of the shooting surface.I shot the bottle by dropping it on the table to get some liquid coming out of the neck. I triggered the camera with an acoustic trigger when the bottle hit the table.
I shot the tall glass originally in the same way, but in the end (and after breaking one glass), I got better images with it static and dropping lemon and lime from above the glass and triggering with a laser beam as it hit the liquid surface. I shot the fruit and ice hanging from a boom separately from the glass and bottle shots.
I composited about 6 images for the final composition.
The bottle had a frost effect made from petroleum jelly (Vaseline) coating the glass and then sprayed with a water / glycerine mix.
I replaced the juice in the bottle with a coloured water mix and a very very small (5mm on the end of a stirring rod) amount of PVA to make the water slightly cloudy like the real product, but not too cloudy to stop light passing through it and becoming too dark.
I shot at 1/4000 sec using Elinchrom Hi-Sync at f/11 200 ISO using a Canon 5D Mk3 + 100mm f2.8 macro lens.
Looking forward to your critique,
Regards,
Andrew
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Shanne Simonsen
ParticipantHi Alex
This is my first try at submitting something to Pro club ☺ It’s the #58 workshop with the fake icecubes.
I don’t have any, so I used a crystal bowl upside-down instead.I use continues lights, and I have some awesome Lee filters, which I’ve used in my square LED lamp behind my backdrop to make the purple light.
Only one shot at f/13.0 1.0 ISO100 – no stacking.
My gear is:
Canon 80D with 100mm f/2.8L
Savage 700 Watt LED Studio Light Kit
walimex pro Soft LED 520 Brightlight Bi Color
Savage Translum mediumThanks for the review
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Shanne Simonsen
ParticipantMy final image was lost – here it is ☺
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